Help a school reader understand one WRS paragraph
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What is claimed
Choose one difficult paragraph in https://worldresearchstate.com/records/shannon/ and suggest a clearer version for a school-level reader. Explain the missing intermediate idea without changing the scientific claim.
Scope and assumptions
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Citation identity
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